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Look at all of these poems
So sophisticated
Every word has a purpose and mine have none
They use language techniques, metaphors, personification, onomatopoeia and imagery
My poem is a piece of crap
My phone screen whispers "No!"
Tap, tap, tap. Goes my fingers as I write this
It doesn't even rhyme
I can't think of one, I don't have the time
I can just imagine you, the audience reading this now
"Ugh! This poem sucks."
So, I will do my best and leave with a bow









This is my poem
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I am just going to say that I didn't get too much into the antiseptic game and didn't pay attention. I just liked to look at the art and design and I thought it was cool but I felt left out. When the new Anti video camera out I was cringing so bad, it was like watching your dad trying to be hip and cool but it's Jack so I watched it anyway. That is when I realized that I was not apart of a community as a whole. I looked at all of these people who were so hyped and joining in with all the fun and I wasn't because I was too lazy to fit little pieces of the puzzle together. So, now I want to have some fun. As we know Jack died on his say goodbye video and Anti took over his body and pretended to be Jack all this time as it was revealed in the new video. Videos go back to normal because he needs to maintain his channel but one question will stay at the back of your mind, who is antisepticeye? One thing to be sure of is that Anti is from an alternate dimension,where all the good people become evil and all the evil people become good. But if he's Jack, what happened to him that turned him evil? What made him want to take over Jack's body? Well, I haven't decided yet. Like jack, I want to make his back story open to the community.
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A while ago something happened with my computer's battery and it won't turn on. Most likely it would be fixed during the summer. That was really unfortunate but now I get to focus on drawing in a more traditional style, yay? Oh, and I forgot my password for a long time so there's that too. So yeah.
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Johnny was 6 years old, he was looking outside of the car window, his babysitter was driving him home late. "ok, hopefully, he's not home yet so I can still keep my job." She said, she parked but braked immediately when she saw Johnny's Dad. His arms were crossed, he was in a brown jacket, a bage shirt, brown pants and shoes, he looked really angry with her. "uh oh." She said. She carfully walked out of the car and so did Johnny. He pulled on her light pink blouse. "You took my car, with my son, to God knows what and you think that everything will be fine?!" He said in a montone voice and yelled the last part. "Do you have any idea how worried I was?! I thought my son was kidnapped by a teenage babysitter who had nothing better to do." He yelled, he loosed his grip because he was chocking her. She inhaled before she spoke up." I'm sorry. I wanted to go to the concert and I took him with me..." She stopped and looked at him and he was still mad. Her voice went squeeky after she got really scared. "I should of told you! I should of told you I had other plans!" She paniced. He lets go of her and turns around to grab two bags from behind him, he gave them to her. She was speechless, he sighed." This has happened before, hasn't it?" He said. She shyly nodded. "I don't want you to be my baby sitter any more, I don't want you anywhere near my son. I want you to take these bags and leave."He siad. She shakes the bags up and down, they were really heavy, she puts two and two together and figured out they were bags of money. she was impressed because johnny's dad because he didn't earn enough money for him to give two bags worth of money like it was no big deal. Then she thought, what if it was stolen? "where did you get these from?" She said. "It doesn't matter where I got the money from, it's yours now." He said simply. He was too fed up with her at this point and he was just waiting for her to leave. Johnny was frozen from fear, not because his dad was being violent but because he was going to loose his baby sitter. Johnny had a crush on her and he didn't want her to leave. He loved her, he loved her hair was dyed pink at the top, her black round eyes were beautiful, she wore black skinny jeans that showed off her hips and she was basically a bad ass doe. "Dad! Nooooo! Don't make her leave." He whined. "I don't trust her to look after you. I just want you to be safe." He said. The baby sitter left happily after she day dreamed on what she could spend on her money. 

Johnny's dad went back inside his house and sent his son to bed. He stayed up and watched the tv for a little bit before going to bed himself. He looked at a picture of his wife who died a few years back. "I love you." He siad and went to sleep. The next morning he woke up early so he can get his son ready for school. He got out of his bad and got ready himself before waking up his son. He went into his son's room to wake him up but he was already awake.
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Elevator

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Yuma Suzuki, a boy age 17 with black hair and brown eyes, he was a student in Hawking high. He wore a button up shirt and black pants, his blazer was around his arm. He ran for the elevator and was about to close the door but he noticed a girl in the same class as him run into the elevator as well. He had a crush on her for a while now and didn't want to get attention from her so he looked away blushing. She looked over him and looked confused as to why he was trying to advoid her. "hey." She said. He puts on a brave face and looks at her. " H hey." He looked back staight away. It was just silence between them until the lights went out and the elevator seemed to stop. He pressed the emergancy button "Hi, can you help us?" He said. There was a muffled voice though the speakers "ok, hold on. Unfortunetly it would take 24 hours before you'll get any help." the voice said. He froze, his world was ending. He had to spend 24 hours with the girl he liked in a broken elevator and by that time it would become obvious that he likes her. "24 hours ?!" He yelled. He turned around and saw the girl sitting in the corner with her knees tucked in and it sounded like she was crying. He sat down next to her, he hesitently touched her shoulder and she looked at him. " It's going to be ok. We'll get help and we'll get out of here." He said. He blushed as he saw her smile he smiled too. "You're Yuma right?" She said. He nodded. "Yeah, you are in my biology class Mirai" He said. 

They talled for a while, they talked about school, the different classes they had, where they usually go to eat lunch and stuff like that. Mirai made the bold move to talk abot something more personal. "I remember when I was 12 I had a huge crush on a boy I liked. He excepted my love and we dated for a few weeks but we broke up." Yuma felt sorry for her having to go though that. "oh I'm so sorry..." He said, his tone was low and conforting. "It's ok." She said. "It just didn't work out for the both of us." She added and grinned, he let out an awkward laugh. Yuma searched through his backpack and found his sketchbook and pencilcase. He started drawing a person, Mirai looked over his shoulder and saw he was drawing her and it was really good. He finished the drawing and she was in awe at his work. It had her blue eyes, her brown hair, her cute smile, it was perfect."wow. That is amamzing."She said. "You think? I could do better." He said. He realized something "not to boast or anything." he quickly covered up his mistake. He gave the sketchbook to her "Do you want to draw something too?" He asked. She was un sure at first, she wasn't as good as he was but then she has been practing a lot and have gotten better. "Ok, I'll draw you." She said. She started drawing, Yuma looked over her and gave her bits of advice along the way. When she finished she was actualy suprised by how well she did, she still wasn't able to compare to his work but It was better then what she would usually draw. 

They drew a lot of drawings after that. They talked some more and they became friends at this point. It has been 10 hours since the power went out. They got a call from the speaker "this is just an update. we have figured out what is going on but it will still take some time. Sorry for your in convinence. " He said. "well, that's a relief." Yuma said to her. "uh... yeah." she said. They went back to talking but Mirai looked distracted and she was freaking out. He wanted to find out what was bothering her all of the sudden. was it because she was scared of never getting out of there again? "what's the matter?" He asked. She took a moment to respond "I just remembered we have homework to do and if we do get out we will have to do it." She said. He thought it was cute that she was worring about homework. She wasn't the smartest students in the class and she would sometimes day dream in class therefore she doesn't learn the material in the class. "Here, I'll help you with your homework. what are you stuck on?" He said. She looked through her bag and took out her biology homework. She pointed at one of the questions and he hepled her find the answer. He helped her a few times before she did it on her own. "You're a good teacher." She said and smiled. "even better than the teachers at our school." She added and laughed. He laughed too "nice. I will tell the teachers that." He said. "Noooo. Don't." She whined. 

Their stomaches grumbled and they were getting hungry. Yuma and Marai looked through their bags to find any food. Marai could find any, she ate it all at lunch and didn't buy any snacks. Yuma had some food left over from his lunch, just an apple and half of his sandwich. He gave her the apple and he hand the sandwich. "Thank you." She said, her face was a light shade of pink. "well,You're lucky I didn't eat much at lunch." He said, he blushed a little too. They drank some water because it fills you up more but water reminded Yuma of his new situation. He had to go to the bahtroom. He knew he couldn't hold it in because he wouldn't be able to but he can't just go in the elevator. He waited a little while but he really had to go "hey um Marai?" He said. She looked at him and he looked really desberate. "I need to go to the bathroom... so I'm going to have to go...here." He said suggestivly, hoping she would get the idea. "that's so digusting but go." She said and turned around into a coner. He went into the coner and went. It was getting dark and so they laid beside eachother and went alseep. Suddenly the lights went on and the power went back up. They were really tired but as soon as the doors opened they got up. "hey, before we get off this elevator I want to say something." Yuma said. She nodded as to say 'continue'. "I like you. I have for a very long ti-" Before he could finish that sentence she kissed him. He was shocked and blushed. She pulled away "I like you too." She said. 
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